Moore, who revised her poems, just the same way she ended up binding her hair, republished this poem eventually in short form, very short, where three pages were reduced to two sentences.

穆尔，以和梳理她的发型的相同方式，将这首诗进行了改编，最终以极为简短的形式重新发表了这首诗，三张纸的诗被删到只剩下两句。

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