I was graduated from Beijing Commercial College in July 24.
我于24年从北京商学院毕业。
I was graduated from Beijing Commercial College in July 2004.
我于2004年从北京商学院毕业。
I was graduated from Beijing Commercial College in July 2004.
俺于2004年从北京商学院毕业。
I graduate from Shanghai Commercial College and my major is business management.
我毕业于上海商学院，主修商业管理。
He is doing a commercial course at the local college.
他在当地的学院里教授一门商业课程。
As they are affected by the commercial ads, more and more college students pursue fashion.
由于他们收到了商业广告的影响，越来越多的大学生追求时尚。
E. g. He is doing a commercial course at the local college.
他在当地的学院里教授一门商业课程。
E. g. He is doing a commercial course at the local college.
他在当地的学院里教授一门商业课程。
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