The essay adequately accomplishes most of the writing task. It demonstrates a developed organizational structure, though there may occasionally be a lack of relevance, clarity or consistency.

能充分地满足写作的大部分要求。结构合理，尽管有些观点不明确，内容不连贯，论据乏力。

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Additionally, the lack of a common understanding of the relevance of information between technical and business users affects the usefulness of delivered information.

另外，在技术人员和业务用户之间对信息缺乏统一的理解，这会影响交付的信息的效用。

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This was not a willful effort to deceive but a practical lack of local geographic knowledge, because at that stage in the local consumer's life it was of no practical value or particular relevance.

他们不是故意骗我，而是确实缺乏有关本地的地理知识。因为在那种环境下，这些知识对本地消费者的生活没有实用价值或是什么特别关系。

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Conversely, a lack of relevance is the challenge currently facing retailers Sears and JCPenney.

FORBES: Connect

In presentations, self-centeredness is manifested by a lack of relevance to the audience, and in sales by the lack of benefits for the customer.

FORBES: Having a 'versation

There's already a surfeit of computerized English instructional aids for the classroom, but most lack the cultural touchstones and relevance needed to engage kids, says Ooi, who is an adviser to the Web project.

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