In the second stanza, the tone of the poem changes. The speaker sounds confident.

诗人的口气在第二段有了变化 似乎自信心加强了。

youdao

I have kept the shape of the poem, opened out its sense more clearly, and tried - as Lowell rightly insists one must try - to get the tone.

我保留了诗歌的外形，更为清楚地展现出诗的意念。

youdao

This is the tone I imagined the waitress using in your poem.

我想象中你诗里的女服务员就是用这种语调说话的。

youdao