Your essay needs (a) structure.
你这篇文章组织不好。
Her essay is full of spelling mistakes.
她的文章到处都是拼写错误。
Your essay does not address the real issues.
你的论文没有论证实质问题。
The essay was a meaningless jumble of ideas.
这篇散文思想混乱，使人不知所云。
Your essay is littered with spelling mistakes.
你的文章里到处是拼写错误。
The essay contains a number of factual errors.
文章中有一些与事实不符的错误。
You should include some examples in your essay.
你应该在文章里举一些例子。
This essay will have to be completely rewritten.
这篇文章得全部重写。
Could you cut your essay from 5 000 to 3 000 words?
请把你的文章从5 000字删减至3 000字好吗？
The essay was cobbled together from some old notes.
这篇文章是用以前的一些笔记胡乱拼凑而成的。
I had time to do a quick edit of my essay before handing it in.
我呈交论文之前有点时间，很快地校订了一遍。
Quotations should be used to make points, not to pad the essay.
引语应该是用来陈述观点的，而不是为了拉长文章。
The points you make are fine, but the whole essay lacks coherence.
你提出的论点很好，但整篇文章缺乏呼应连贯。
You're going to have to do a lot more work on this essay before it's presentable.
你的这篇文章还得多加润饰才能交得出手。
NB: The opinions stated in this essay do not necessarily represent those of the Church of God Missionary Society.
请注意：本文所述观点不一定代表上帝传教会教堂的观点。
This essay discusses some of these techniques.
这篇文章讨论了这些技巧。
But that doesn't make for a good essay, does it?
但那并不是一篇好文章，对吧？
Essay Writing: an academic paper of 2,000 to 2,500 words.
论文写作：一篇2000-2500词的学术论文。
You would have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay.
你将有30分钟的时间来构思、写作和修改你的文章。
The essay is the hardest thing to do, so he's put it off the longest.
论文是最难的，所以他拖延得最久。
The essay sparked a massive thread on the internet community blog MetaFilter.
这篇文章在互联网社区博客MetaFilter 上引发了一场大规模的讨论。
How you present the content in a test essay is as important as what you know.
在一个论文测验中，你怎么介绍论文的内容与你知道些什么一样重要。
Once the essay was "flawless," she would take an evening to walk me through my errors.
一旦文章“无懈可击”，她就会花一个晚上的时间帮我改正错误。
This essay will present the following problems and state my opinions on how to address them.
本文将提出以下问题，我会就如何解决这些问题提出自己的看法。
In any event, my mother and her red pen showed me how deeply flawed a flawless essay could be.
无论如何，我的母亲和她的红笔向我展示了一篇看似完美无瑕的文章可能有多么严重的瑕疵。
Perhaps the point of writing the flawless essay was not to give up, but to never willingly finish.
也许写一篇完美的文章的目的不是放弃，而是永不放弃。
According to college folklore, a well turned essay has the power to seduce an admissions committee.
根据大学里的民间传说，一篇优秀的文章能够吸引招生委员会。
It would all be innocent enough—20 minutes of busy work—except it comes attached to a personal essay.
这再简单不过了，除了要附加一篇个人论文，其余工作只需忙碌20分钟（就可以搞定）。
On two measures—professors' feedback and the number of essay exams—selective schools do slightly worse.
从教授的反馈和论文考试的数量这两个指标来看，精英学校的表现略差。
More to the point, he had yet to settle on a subject for the personal essay accompanying the application.
说得更确切些，他还没有决定好申请时所附的个人论文的主题。
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