The excellence or triteness of your writing was not the matter under consideration.
在卓越或你的写作陈腐没有审议的事项。
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
除了陈腐与空洞外，这段文字还因为自己的句子结构——对称呆板，节奏单调——而成为败笔。
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
除了陈腐与空洞外，这段文字还因为自己的句子结构——对称呆板，节奏单调——而成为败笔。
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