OK, we'll have a careful look at the content of your case study in a minute, but I just want to make a general comment first, before you start writing your second draft.
好的,我们稍后会仔细看一下你的案例研究的内容,但是在你开始写第二稿之前,我想先做一个大概的评论。
The way to determine whether your answer is natural is simply by writing a first draft of the answer and then read it out loud.
你最好先写下一个「自我介绍」的初稿,然后大声地朗读。
The objectives of the first draft are for you to provide a complete initial version of your paper so that we can provide you feedback on the writing, organization, and approach to your critique.
第一份草稿的目的是为让你提出完整的报告初始版本,我们才能对你的写作、组织、评论方法给予回馈。
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